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***SAMPLE PRESS RELEASE***
Written by: Kathy Finklekitty
16 Mushroom Road, Crowtown, CT 06652
Daytime phone: 203-428-5944 email: [email protected]
Date submitted: April 1, 2008
Use: As soon as possible
Fresh plants, old books, and new activities are in store for visitors to the Harvest Fair, sponsored by St. Swithan’s Church, on Saturday, Nov.5.
The fair, the third annual fund-raiser for the church’s Mission Society, will be from 10 to 4 on the grounds of Pastafazool Park, Cuttlefish Road (Route 112), Crowtown. Admission is free.
Houseplants of many kinds, including cacti and African violets, will be sold, along with fruits and vegetables from the fall harvest: pumpkins, gourds, squashes, six varieties of apples, Indian corn, and pears.
A new feature of the fair will be rides for children, including a merry-go-round and a mini-Ferris wheel. Booths will sell used books, white elephants, kitchenwares, a variety of crafts, and children’s toys. The Mission Society members will also have a bake sale, featuring cakes, cookies, and seasonal pies.
The society will raffle a quilt on which members have been working for a year. Tickets costing $1 will be sold at the fair, and are available from members now.
Money raised from the fair will help support a village school, operated by Jesuit brothers in poverty-stricken Contanuega, Panama.
For more information on the fair or raffle or to donate books or used household items in good condition, call Betty Boop, chairman, at 203-428-7654 or visit www.stswithan.org.
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